All Comments on 'My First Sexual Experience Ch. 01'

not bad, but amazed you think the expression is "intensive purposes". It's "to all intents and purposes".

This is going to be a good story. Keep at it!

Would be nice if the title used the correct word. I think you mean loses not looses, which would mean it was simply loosened up and not lost.

Masturbating to this now...wanna fuck together baby?...you will really feel something then