All Comments on 'My First Threesome'

Though the plot was lacking, and the dialogue stiff, I loved the detailed sex, and reviewed this story favourably in the New Story Reviews of the Author's Hangout, Lit Forums.

As this story aligns well with my own fantasies, I found it quite enjoyable!

Thank You!

The detailing of the sex didn't make up for the constant spelling and grammatic errors.

and hopefully not the last. Would love to read about further encounters.