by BluSkiez
If your story comes from a real experience, was once enough or did your experimentation have to grow exponentially? If it was all a fantasy, would you really choose to go down that road? I have played in that world, and my memories will always be vivid. Unfortunately the relationships failed in the long run. I don't regret any of my choices, but it is playing with fire.
I loved the story and they way in which you told it. The only thing I would have changed, if I was writing this, would be never to allow her to see the stranger. I think for her the fantasy would then remain strong she would wonder every time she met one of Ben's friends or coworkers if he was the one. Perhaps this was a true story, if so you are not only well written but also married well. Either way 5 stars for this tantalizing sexy escapade.
A very nice story. I like the way, you write. I hope, i can read more stories from you
The transition from a fantasy and then in stages to the complete enactment was very well done.
I do agree with the comment that the stranger should have stayed anonymous. It would have better fit the overall tone of mystery that infused the fantasy in the first place.
If there ever was to be a follow-up, a 'reveal' could be an introduction to a new encounter, rather than the end of this one.
If it is, that's spectacularly good. Detailed, sensual..and interestingly written in a matter of fact sort of way..more please...
Wow, thanks for all the great comments. I've just submitted another story, so stay tuned!
Very nice story. Pacing, grammar, and the notoriously tricky dialogue are all solid. It felt like a genuine account, which is what really sells the story. Keep it up.
Trust, confidence, and communication is key and the rest OMFG!!