All Comments on 'My First Time'

Really enjoyed your story. Great tension.

This is a very good depiction of a kind of experience not uncommon in some way or another in guys' early sexual awakening. I almost held my breath when reading it

I'm not going to rate you low because your character is a complete piece of shit that seems to think he deserves credit for being not as bad a rapist as his douche frat brothers he is supposedly protecting the lady from. Your descriptions and storytelling are good. That being said, do you think you can write a story that actually gets me aroused and doesn't make me want to kill a college nerd?

This whole story is about plain rape. You just made it erotic, which is absolutely disgusting.

Compelling!