All Comments on 'My First Time Bi'

by alabamacowgirl69

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bornagainbornagainabout 16 years ago
Good reading

It was good reading but you should try to give some descriptions of the people in the story like what she looks like her breast size and difference in each other you might try to use these ideas.

Obsessive_LesbianObsessive_Lesbianabout 16 years ago
Brief but sexy!

You are good when it comes to describe the intimacy between two women. Next time try to add detailed scenes in your stories.

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