by The_Good_Doctor
What a great intro, leading to a lovely seduction & great lovemaking, but then a quick ending. The ending let you down. Another half an hour of typing would have made a grewat story tremendous. So there now needs to be another chapter
Menderman
This story was really good. The only thing that I did not like was that the ending wasn't as good....even though the story started out good your ending made it drop...
fantastic story love this one very much. i could have gone on reading more of this had there been more to read.do hope you write another part of this one, great bit of writing.
Loved this story and it made me wet just reading it. Looked for more by the same author and was very surprised to find that this was the only one.
I love it! Best story I've read so far. Reminds me of myself a lot. Keep writing, I'm your fan now :)
To say the least this story was absolutely amazing. Thank you for the story.
Beautifully written story! So looking forward for ther series to continue! :)