All Comments on 'My French Holiday'

I really loved this - beautifully written and truly erotic. But why the repeated chapters? I thought at first it must be a fancy idea - like a David Lynch movie, perhaps - but no, I guess it must be a simple error. Never mind. A terrific read and I look forward reading your other submissions,

Best wishes

Tony

hi your sorry was really good you maid my cock stand till the end of the story................

I just want to fuck you.......fuck you......hardly........

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I seldom write to writers but your writing is seldom seen, never equaled for interior detail, correct grammar and overall HEAT. Very nice work and thanks for sharing.

Bluejacket01

This is Amanda, I wrote the story. Somhow it's been repeated. It should end half way down page 5!

Up there with your normal high standard. Keep up the good work. Thank you.