All Comments on 'My Friend and His Family Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You ever see dialogue punctuated like this in a story (and not a script)? No, Why? Because it's fucking stupid!

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Sudha: "Not yet sir. First, let me give you a good bath. Then, you can do whatever you want."

Me: "But I can't wait for that long."

Sudha: "Don't worry sir. It will be quick."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is a fine story. Sexy and loving. It reads like English is not your first language. So that is exciting too. I would love to read this story in your first language.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Excerpt from the story.

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... she walked back a few steps and removed her clothes one by one. First her saree, and then blouse. She did not wear any bra and when she removed her blouse, her mango shaped perky boobs were freed. They were big and firm with brown erect nipples. They looked like they were begging me to pounce on them...

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