by KinkyLand0
Good story, but a few pointers:
- Grammar should be double checked. There were a few places where it threw off the story a bit
- the use of the word pants... i get you referred to them as underpants, but then calling them pants for the rest of the story took away from it a bit.
Other than that a good start, look forward to reading more.
The way to my heart is making me lick your pretty asshole and telling me to eat my cum after you jerk me off. 4yourpleasureiam
I think he should also do some major clean-up work on her sweet butt when it is eventuallly needed. He should ask for the privilege!