All Comments on 'My Friend Took My Girl'

Yeah, ur already pretty good writing the sex scenes.

I would say even to pull back on the breakup aspect and continue with this story

I would agree with Anon. There is a lot of potential for a series here. But all the same. Nice work. Very sexy

A bit rushed but still good

Dump your girl and friend. Then run like hell and never look back.

Good stuff ... agreed a bit rushed, but all in all enjoyable to read. I'd go with a little more SPH in the future.. but that's my thing.

I woukd be more interested i you continuing this story.

And then what happened? 4 stars 🌟