All Comments on 'My Friend's Hot Mom who was also My Teacher'

I agree about the grammatical mistakes. Especially confusion between he and she. The friend and the cousin are sometimes referred to as his and sometimes as her. But putting aside the grammar, I thought the story was OK. The main problem is that things lead to sex too quickly. There should be character description and development, some motivation about why the characters are doing what they are doing, some hesitation and guilt in their behavior, but also some temptation etc. I encourage you to write more. Your stories will get better with more practice and more feedback. (By the way, I am also from Pune).

Yeah fucking the teacher hope you came in her cunt got pregnant thats my number one goal get friends aunt and my mom pregnant so far got 4 pregnant having my kid mom aunt two friends moms pregnant