by je71sox
A hijab dose not cover the face, nicab does!
One star for not knowing what you write about.
The story got a bit rushed in the middle, but it was enjoyable. Have you considered a part 2?
Very sexy story. For me the problem was that it went at warp speed from no touching, barely talking to fucking. It would have been sexier if there had been more development between the two poles. As others have suggested it seems to call for follow up.
Good story overall. I’d like to see more details about what John is seeing/thinking. Like she had on leggings - did she choose not wear any panties? Was she shaved? Was she tight?
I hope you do a chapter 2 where John gets more comfortable and more alpha after realizing jamilah has the body for lots of sex but never experienced it with a man this way and totally gives herself to John.
Let’s see more. Did she move I. With you. Did you have sex more with you?
Love the story. I just realized I’ve read it twice. I have Mixed feelings, I’d like to know more but I also like to imagine the continuation.
5*
Tc
Awesome, I have diabetes, and I get cramps in my legs, even then I came like a river, when I read this story, all I can say for John, is that he is the original bad boy, LOLOL