All Comments on 'My Friend's Muslim wife is Grieving'

by je71sox

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A hijab dose not cover the face, nicab does!

One star for not knowing what you write about.

1thaiguy1thaiguyover 2 years ago

Hoping that there is a part 2

pepepilotpepepilotover 2 years ago

The story got a bit rushed in the middle, but it was enjoyable. Have you considered a part 2?

BEERQUACKBEERQUACKover 2 years ago
great

hope you have more for this story

oldmooseoldmooseover 2 years ago

Very sexy story. For me the problem was that it went at warp speed from no touching, barely talking to fucking. It would have been sexier if there had been more development between the two poles. As others have suggested it seems to call for follow up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

nice erotic part but culturally or religiously quite uneducated.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story overall. I’d like to see more details about what John is seeing/thinking. Like she had on leggings - did she choose not wear any panties? Was she shaved? Was she tight?

I hope you do a chapter 2 where John gets more comfortable and more alpha after realizing jamilah has the body for lots of sex but never experienced it with a man this way and totally gives herself to John.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Instantly

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
More

Let’s see more. Did she move I. With you. Did you have sex more with you?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love the story. I just realized I’ve read it twice. I have Mixed feelings, I’d like to know more but I also like to imagine the continuation.

5*

Tc

rinkygrinkygover 1 year ago

Awesome, I have diabetes, and I get cramps in my legs, even then I came like a river, when I read this story, all I can say for John, is that he is the original bad boy, LOLOL

Roughneck125Roughneck12511 months ago
Looking for part 2

Still waiting to see out come on this story. Need part 2

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Too short. Just when it gets hot it’s over

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