by JeanGenet
You have a talent for providing descriptive details that elevate the hotness of the story. More stories, please.
I don't understand the husband wanting to watch his wife get plowed, but the story was hot and well written. We got to know the characters. I'd be interested in finding out more about them.
R.
Good job for your first story. Don’t quit, in fact, continue this one. I came a couple of times also as I also love cumming in married women!
Thank you for your comments! I just submitted another story that's pending publication now with the not-so-great title of "A recounting of sex with K". Authenticity of detail and psychology is my major concern while writing and I hope that this next story will continue to convey that.
I'm also considering a cheating boyfriend story that would lean heavily into the girlfriend's inner conflict and the idea of fantasy vs heart, but I'm not really sure how to write it or which perspective to write it from.
Regards,
JeanGenet
There was something about the described awkwardness of all three of them that gave this such a visual power of reality in my mind. Very different from most stories here. A lot of interesting literary devices. it may be your first time here but certainly not your first work of fiction. Yes, I definitely want to read more. Got me very wet. Since she was no longer using the vibrator that was removed after our hero entered the room, I don't think you'll mind that I used it on myself. Keep writing, Sweetie!
xoxo, Di
Wish I could have rubbed one off myself but I was reading the story on the bus. Very believable indeed. No problem identifying with the characters, at least from my early days. Keep it up and so will I.
Wow you Sir kept me captivated in your very intimate step by step account, what every Man wants to experience. I can only dream of myself doing that to my neighbors wife too who lacks confidence in her well endowed beauty even though she is just an average looker that has never had a Make Over. I've had many a Wank picturing myself with your story in mind. So to
you Sir I Salute and please write more on this very topic, storyline. Helpless Dreamer
AWESOME, IF I WASNT GONNA BANG MY WIFE IN A LITTLE WHILE I WOULDA JERKED OFF TO IT EASILY
Almost happen to me as well. My friend has an 8in cock & had a crush on my wife. We've talked about wife swapping before but im curious to know how my wife wouldve took his cock