by Ijustmight71
This is the upmost best writing I have read from you. You had me on edge with every word, and wishing I was there....again
If there is not a series following this chapter, I will lose my mind. You have my total attention. Great tale, be sure it continues.
Great story , haven't ran into this scenario as far as the story go"s. Made it very unique. Can't wait for part 2. Good job.
A truly erotic tale retold vividly. Extremely hot capturing the desire of all parties involved.
Was looking forward to see him fuck her in the pussy right after the dad did, instead of getting a blowjob. Great story nonetheless!
Very hot scenario, hot story, hot read. (some spelling errors though)
Holy smokes, that was fucking HOT! I suspected my g/f may have done her adopted dad, and I know she had sex fantasies of fucking my dad, and this tale nailed it! 5 stars! Very well-written!