All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Best Friend'

Unrealistically stupid.

Great story, dialogue is a bit awkward at times though. Besides that I don’t find this story unrealistic and had a similar situation in college that lasted for a month.

Looking forward to your next story

You can't write.

This story is over written and childish. it might be a middle-schooler's writing but it's hardly a first year Uni student's writing.

Madison's "puffy proud" nipples cracked me up. I don't think the combination works.

Hannah's C boobs not quite as large as Madison's 32G shows the poor effort. NOT QUITE AS LARGE? Please, give me a break. Hanah's boobs are tiny compared to Madison's.

Any idea what the difference is between 'lead' and 'led'?

""Sorry Madi but I just could resist grabbing a hold of these things ..." Should that have been 'couldn't'?

Did you waste any time at all in PROOF READING?

It is realistic. I have had a wife share me with her best friend.

I don't understand why so many authors feel it necessary to overly-embellish the attributes of the characters. Seriously, 32g breasts? Or how about 8" long and 5.5" thick (is that diameter or circumference?)? This type of writing simply reinforces the immaturity of the author. Then, of course, there are the innumerable issues with sentence structure, language use, grammar, ad nauseam.

I really wish there was a mechanism on Literotica that would allow a reader to tag and subsequently hide a story so it would not take up space in the table of contents.

Great story

Yes, there are some proofreading problems. Yes, the cock and boob sizes are over-emphasized (though Hannah fantasizing about Wyatt's big cock is the whole premise of the story). And Zach is hardly the first (or the 10,001st) writer on Literotica to go overboard on the sizes of breasts and dicks.

If you don't enjoy a story, move the frick on. Life is too short to offer anything but support and constructive criticism to these authors who are giving freely of their creativity to help us get off.

This is a well-written and well-constructed story with excellent characters. Complaints about the characters that they are unrealistic is just silly, as are complaints about the descriptions of their physical characteristics. These characteristics, which are completely realistic, are also important in explaining the characters to the reader. The love scene in this story is written with great taste and skill, and is a vital part of the overall plot as it unfolds. Indeed, this story has great potential, and deserves many more chapters. The reader can only be grateful to the author for it, with the hope that more chapters and stories will be forthcoming. Five stars.

Please make a new story about a boyfriend having sex with his girlfriend and her two best friends.

The boyfriend and girlfriend are dominant while the girlfriend's two best friends are submissive and have their pussies and asses owned by the boyfriend and girlfriend who uses a strap-on to penetrate one of her friends while her boyfriend sticks his large cock into the other. The two girls hold hands and kiss while moaning like sluts and begging the two to fuck them up their asses.