All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Best Friend Sabrina'

I like the story

hope part 2 is soon, and as hot

He should just get a new girlfriend. She is a party animal, he is introverted. Recipe for acceptance to LW category down the track when she leaves him home and parties with any cock she can find.

Damn youre such a tease! I love the first chapter and hope we get more of your writing in general. 😍

... but I'm just glad I'm not hosting that party. There would be a girl laying in her vomit on the bathroom floor and a guy passed out beside his car outside, having failed to drive away in it because I took his keys. And 3 other unclaimed patches of puke on my recently-cleaned carpet.

An error worth fixing: "She opened her eyes again, visibly shuttering." You mean shuddering, not shuttering.

I like your characterizations! Their personalities are strongly shown and each is unique.