All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Special Gift'

I commend your effort, since English obviously isn't your first language.

I read this only because you're new, if this is the best you can do .... stop. There was no story, nothing but a jumble of poorly written phrases.

Please write the next part soon

I like your story!

It's a good start, even though a bit short.

Looking forward to reading the pre-/sequel s.

TIP:don't mind (some of) the comments. No respectable critic would tell you to stop writing. If you want to improve a skill you need to use it more... not less...

This was written like a Reader's Digest story. Very factual and to the.point. Like a good meal it needs some flavor, some sauce.

A week with two pussies. He is in heaven

I think he just could ejakulat a little bit too often. so it was not really realistic!