All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Younger Sister Ch. 01'

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ArediaArediaover 3 years ago

I very much like it - please continue! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice start

I am imagining where you are going to go with this story and am anticipating a chapter 2. By the way are you ever going to continue the Garden Shed?

You left us hanging.

ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 3 years ago

I'm going to tell you a big secret. A lot of times the younger sisters don't get the education the older sister gets. So, where are they going to find out the finer touches of sexual conduct? They use their older sister's boyfriend as a tutor.

franklygazerfranklygazerover 3 years ago
More, please!

Little sister clearly wants more... so do I!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Damn

I can't wait for part 2!

xsiveonexsiveoneover 3 years ago
Great beginning!

An excellent start to what should become a good series. I hope you continue with it, but please carry on with The Garden Shed. That story is from near my time as is this one and holds many wonderful memories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story.

Perfectly credible story from you again. I had almost the exact same experience also in 1969, girlfriend's younger sister got curious, asked some questions so I fucked her, just the once but memorable and nobody else ever knew about it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great read

I would have been 16 or 17 around the time of this story and living in the north of England. I realise you have to stick to the rules when writing here as it follows American legislation but as a young man at that time and place I find it amusing that most if us had left school and had started our first job by 16. Great times the 60s and 70s in the UK. Keep up the great writing it brings back a lot of memories

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 3 years ago

This was quite good. Love it.

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxover 3 years ago
PLEASE DON'T:

as excellent as it could become Pete have both women those sisters same time .

PLEASE DON'T doing that . lots stories already done single dude totally banging

couple gals . PLEASE DON'T doing same . . . . . . lots ways around this : Sarah tests

Pete lots more than she's already literally done matter fact closer sequence

from 2ND. needs become [ Sarah has Pete eating her out while she sitting atop

washing machine while Jayne unknowingly what's going down getting ready

doing laundry \ Sarah shows up in Jayne's bedroom extremely early the morning

while she along Pete they sleeping Sarah begins fondle Pete along she wakes up

he tries his best avoid things fails terrible along they begin seriously getting busy

even though Jayne sleeping next them ] . PLEASE DON'T make him do the

two them same time PLEASE DON'T

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxover 3 years ago
3RD. CHAPTER:

by the time that 3RD. CHAPTER does happen - - - Pete he's just so damn obsessed

about Sarah he'll do literally whatever she says . because this closer sequence

this chapter needs become [ Sarah gives Pete choice he either chooses her

he either picks her along absolutely drops Jayne her sister or he's gonna totally

lose her ] . does Pete picks Sarah choose Sarah the woman that he's

become totally obsessed about \ does Pete keep Jayne his woman his girlfriend

Sarah's sister . along Sarah the woman that he's been obsessing drops him

jasperspenjasperspenover 3 years agoAuthor
Author's comment

@CrankThzJackInDaBox Thank you for commenting, I appreciate all reader's comments, but I only ever write my own stories from my own experiences or imagination.

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 3 years ago

Good story.

My own experiences of that time were a little earlier than that by it the atmosphere was similar. My various girlfriends and I were, I suppose more naive then but it didn't stop us experimenting, fun times.

silveraidersilveraiderover 3 years ago
Great sense of time and place

I like the stories you set in earlier times because you capture the sense of innocence, nervousness and risk so very well. Well written - looking forward to part 2 and wherever you decide to take this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
amazing story, please make more

WOW! we need a second chapter!! I love the way you capture the innocence and the nervousness so well

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 3 years ago
Taking it to the edge

For a story that doesn't have any sexual intercourse in it, this is one sexy story that had me breathing hard along with the two of them. Well done and thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
This is amazing

My current gj has a younger sister named Sarah who is frankly way hotter than my gf, so this story is perfect! Chapter 2 asap please

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxover 3 years ago
Readers Notes:

@jaspersen . . . . . . . guess that your imagination hasn't really been literally

running wild \ guess that you not had some experience that able revolve

around this . it's now been total 2 wks. about this story posted :-) :-) GO AHEAD

TAKE MY IDEAS GIVEN JUST GET IT DONE :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
next chapter please

Next chapter please

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 3 years ago

Pretty good buildup but not sure where the story ends up as you mention Jayne is his first wife...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good premise.

Nicely told.

Could have used more dialog about what he did with his girlfriend, and what she did with/to him.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

what an asshole

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