by jasperspen
Your story almost makes me feel young again; it brings back memories of fumbling through the exploring and experimenting of youth in those early years, almost fifteen years prior to the period of your story. As Bob Hope used to say, "Thanks for the memories."
Very erotic. This story combines the sensual buildup of sexual tension, with the thrill of forbidden sex and the excitement of discovery!
need at least 1-2 more chapters, 1 her all the way, 2 her & sis or anal
When the little head does the thinking, things get exciting and over the top. Did he just cheat on his girlfriend or not? They didn't have sexual intercourse, or did they, just without penetration, except for his tongue and finger? Whatever it was, it was so very sexy and hot. The only thing that could have made it better was if Sarah had been wearing her panties instead of "knickers", lol. Still a great story worth all five stars. Thanks
...to write stories that draw you (me) in and carry you right along with the happenings (both the incidentals, and the plot-forwarding sequences).
Great ability with the English (British) language, too.
I immediately gave it ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐.
Paul in Oklahoma
What a champion story so engaging & one that is so easy to relate to. It is fabulously well written maintaining a great pace & dialogue that enhances the eroticism of the whole piece. I am so looking forward to reading the rest of this yarn.
This reminds me of my ex wife’s little sister, Melissa. I wrote a story about that for Literotica. I hope you read it. Email me it you care to discuss it.
Good premise.
But lacks enough dialog about what to do, how it feels, whether there's a way to do whatever it is better.
Needs some teasing rather than rushing toward orgasms.
Four stars.