by jasperspen
I'm always glad to see you've published a new story. My high standards are finally satisfied after so much disappointment, and I don't have to re-read my own writing.
But it really wasn't incest. I still gave you a 5. I am also a fan of the Garden Shed
and always wondered if that was a true story.
Good conclusion to this series with an erotic and plausible ending. I thought the voyeurism was very well done and liked that you didn't turn it into a threesome. Nice writing.
"chief bridesmaid"? Seriously? I think the term you're after is maid of honor.
“My fingers that were buried tightly inside her were forced even harder upwards, so that the tips just touched the end of her cervix”? That must be some long fingers
Absolute loved the story. I could tell you a lot more but after wise thoughts, decided I better not.
Sensitive and sexually enjoyable, many moral lines stepped over but well written and the epilogue finished the story just right.
Another great tale.