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All Comments on 'My Goddess'

by mkpunk

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PrfsrPrfsrabout 7 years ago
Serious proofreading needed!

Too many problems to count.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
very hard work

Needs proof reading to make it worthy of voting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Uncle Ed

Get an editor/proof reader. The dialog sounds very phony. Story lacks any semblance of reality. And your breath stinks. (I'm just assuming the last part. lol)

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