All Comments on 'My Good Neighbor Policy'

by juanwildone

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jazzharpjazzharpover 2 years ago

Cool! Hot!

Great Loving Wives story. Redeem this category, make it your own.

One tiny editing note: around your 21st paragraph, you wrote "Maybe she was still thinking about her beverage, because the sure move would have involved her right hand and - viola - boob covered."

I think you meant to write "voila". Spell check did you dirty. Or did you mean the stringed instrument viola?

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 2 years ago

Wonderful summer day-dream all young men should have!

5

blackrandl1958blackrandl1958over 2 years ago

Wow! That was a blast from the past. Naughty! Randi.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

needs another chapter or 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It's good to have you back after such a long hiatus Juan. Thank you.

Doc

heathrowinneoheathrowinneoover 2 years ago

as always, enjoy your storytelling... well developed and presented... 5 *'s

juanwildonejuanwildoneover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for reading my little tale, and taking the time to comment.

Damn that auto correct, I had every intention of stringing you all along - picked, plucked, strummed, and leave you bowed. I guess it takes a Jazzharp to see the note out of place - wah la - you were right.

ribnitinribnitinover 2 years ago

Accomplished what it set out to do. Well written, happy story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Welcome back! 5*****

HarddaysknightHarddaysknightover 2 years ago

This is great A new story, a very good one from an old friend. Nice job and please keep posting new stories.

enderlocke77enderlocke77over 2 years ago

hmm interesting this has a high score for a fluff piece

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69over 2 years ago

Very impressive story.

TwentysevenTwentysevenover 2 years ago

Wow, 10 years is a long absence. Burning Passion is one of my top 5 ever. It would be much appreciated if you could publish here more often. The category has been taken over by the cucks and the inadequates.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Decent premise.

But what's the rush? He sees her bare boob. Her mouth is wrapped around his mouth. He eats her. They fuck.

Boom!

No foreplay. No buildup, slow or otherwise. Lacks details.

Disappointing.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wow this is unbelievable

For a 19 yearold

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good neighbor policy - that’s a great storyline and well written

imhaplessimhapless3 months ago

Funny -- and cute -- 5*.

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