All Comments on 'My Halloween Fairy'

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dirtysondirtysonabout 1 month ago

Mom should have joined in !...

sp9983sp9983about 1 month ago

I agree with dirtyson that the mom should have joined, but I did like the ending though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

This was a very erotic and arousing story. I loved it, and would love it to continue. Will there be a second chapter?

RMike35RMike35about 1 month ago
Lots of orgasms.

So Amber,Marcus and later Claire ended up fucking to fulfill a Fairy's demands of first 200 orgasms then 230,and now 300 Big O's, I get that but at the end was that the Fairy that saved Marcus's life dressed as a human and wanted to join them in their relationship or was that another girl.

Honestly when Amber declared no attachment between her and her brother Marcus was a load of shit and Amber indeed fell for him,but I was sad that Amber didn't get pregnant like Claire did with Marcus,I was hoping she would have her brothers baby or babies.I think the author should rewrite this to include Amber getting pregnant like Claire and they have lots of babies so Mom and Dad can have grandchildren to spoil,I think they would be okay if Marcus and Amber had sibling children.

lAnatomistelAnatomisteabout 1 month ago

...and just exactly what were Mom and Dad doing?

hehehehe

BrendaNWBrendaNWabout 1 month ago

Very creative and sexy and amazing 😍 I was happy that Amber was pregnant as well but ok with how this first ? chapter ended .. Gina can join them and they can get a bigger place. RMile35 is right on and the fairy could tweak things a bit so that Amber would have completely healthy children with Marcus just like any other guy. Please continue 🤗 .. P.S. I am really poly like you described .. no jealousy just love and caring 😙 💖 💋

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

A good fun story, can't wait to read the Easter and other ones.

BaladeerBaladeerabout 1 month ago

Weird. Entertaining, but weird 😅

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Been writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...