All Comments on 'My Hero...'

Very hot! The spelling threw me off a few times, but I thought it was very well written. I'd like to see this turn into a series! I've a classic weakness for men in uniform!

and yes im writing more and sorry for the grammar errors...ill be more careful next time :)

It started off really good... but the Grammar Nazi inside me brought the grammarhammer down. "u" instead of "you" etc. Sorry, it just had to be said :p

Very nicely done and would have loved to be the Soldier. Nice Story.

Man, this story was just off the charts! Unbelieviable!!