by Freddyj881
I was excited to see another chapter of this outstanding series! Once again another erotic adventure. Great writing!
That was a good story. Finally Katie's husband finds a way, with some help from a store manager where they recently shopped, to make his hot wife Katie hotter still.
I like the way you write the sex scenes -- they are very hot; however, I don't care for your switching back and forth from the past tense to the present tense, and your misuse of the possessive words, i.e., "husbands" for "husband's" and "it's" for "its". For those reasons, even though this is a very old story and you're unlikely to revisit any comments today, I could only give you 4 stars. I do wish I had done this to my wife back when I was married.
I just found this series today. Incredible, hot, stimulating!!! Wow. I’d love to experience this with my own wife as part of her journey to becoming a hotwife.
Loving the read!!! I can’t want get home and ravage my wife!!!