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All Comments on 'My Husband Has A New Girlfriend!'

by hotladyvanessa

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 12 years ago
Good Concept, Decent Execution, Insufficient Content !

More! I don't mean just the sex either . I don't mind a good tease but this is just a tease and run. Double up ( word volume ) and catch up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
very good start!

if this has so many parts, how about combining 2, 3 or 4 parts? It's always hard staying interested in a story that has only a short page each time. and this story sounds interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What part 2?

This is a short, unfinished, poorly developed pile of steaming cow manure. Don't waste your time reading it. Never continued.

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