All Comments on 'My Incestful Sex Life'

I don't know what language he uses ...He has no style. I have read three of his stories and they suck.

Difficult for me to read. Not worth it. Maybe write in your native language.

Has just the right amount of tease and shows a teen boy's lustful thoughts well.

I gave up. 5 paragraphs later and still no story...stuck on yourself much? You suck

Seeing my mom's tits naked was what made me start wanting to fuck her. So round, so firm, nipples sticking out so proudly. I caressed them as I sucked on her nipples. Then we'd fuck.

Please read...

more books...

before writing...

your own story,..

So that you will know how to properly hook and keep a reader's attention. I don't mind every paragraph being one or two sentences, I'm all for experimental writing techniques, but read more short stories, novels, even screenplays, so you can shut these Anonymous commenters up.

...really.

Painful.

To.

Read

In fact, I gave up midway down the first page.

Superb narration

Is this really a true story??

wow... just wow !!

I 'm re-posting another user's public comment because it says it all:

"Eros_343 - over 1 year ago

I thought it was hot

Has just the right amount of tease and shows a teen boy's lustful thoughts well."

Excellent, 5- (★★★★★-)!

☆☆☆☆☆ (5)!