All Comments on 'My King Ch. 02'

I love the story, and hope they end up together.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

This story has been very enjoyable in many ways and I truly hope you continue it. I like the aspects of realism the most and wonder what will transpire next, which to me is a sign of good to great writing. The king is taking chances with his secret encounters with Vivian, including cumming inside of her. What repercussions will befall him/them and where will they meet up next? Please continue this story - there are so many places you could go with it and I hope it maintains/continues some of the themes you have at work here already. Thanks for sharing your writing. I personally will be looking forward to your next installment.

It is a great story so far! I really enjoy the thrill of getting caught. I hope you continue the story.

Need to see how the story unfolds for these two lovers. Great read.