All Comments on 'My Last Summer Before College Ch. 01'

That's the introduction to chapter one

It's going in the right direction and it's (reads easily) very smoothly flowing so far...

I take it this is Part 1? I like where its heading - please don't leave us high and dry! :)

The title was supposed to include Part 1 in it and somehow it was omitted. Hopefully the next twp parts will have that in the title. It was also supposed to be placed in the non erotic category.

My apologies.

O2

Story is an easy read, which is good. I like where how the story is laid out and look forward to the next chapter. I see possible opportunities with the cloths store owner and sister-to-sister activities.

I love reading your work.

I'm enjoying your writing....