All Comments on 'My Little Ventrue Pt. 02 Ch. 08'

Really well written chapter! Everything is shaping up nicely, the exchange between the prince and Lucas was epic and wel executed. Keep up the wonderful writing.

This is an amazing chapter. You have truly crafted an amazing story. The madness of the torpor reminds me of the insanity that the one ring brings the longer you wear it. The politics, the danse macabre, it's all so beautiful.

I can see this being turned into a fantastic TV show. Fucking brilliant

Novus this chapter is so awesome. I can't wait till chapter 9. You to continue to grow as an author and your writing gets better and better!

"She placed the love word again like an immovable flower, wrapped in context and weight so the Nosferatu had no choice but to accept it."

Just - wow.

And that’s how zealots roll. They set the stage to make them look like the aggrieved. Thy find saps to bend to their will. Then they start a war and use the saps as a meat shield while killing mindlessly. Then they moan and bitch and winge about how many young followers were murdered (by those they attacked first).

Most importantly the leader and the next tier DO NOT fight but stay safe.

This is classic Muslim terrorist bullshit. AKA Osama rubbish bin Laden. For perspective the Christian’s pulled the same crap. Well the Roman Catholic Poop did with the crusades. All the while the Righteous “god said it’s ok he told m so” Poop stayed safe far away from being flushed.