All Comments on 'My Little Ventrue Pt. 04 Ch. 16'

Oh, damnation, it is just as I feared and now the tit-ship has sailed away once more after the previous chapter, as I was hoping for personal fun reasons for the bouncy tit castle to keep jiggling my well-rounded mammoth dreams up and down for some more chapters before the plot takes over, but oh well, I'm sure my frowning seamen will see the breast-boat return with fresh meat sooner or later and yes, I remember my promise to behave so ignore everything I say, Mr Novus; I happen to be writing a book of my own so I can't fully stop my flowery garbage until the breast-looking planets have all aligned perfectly (reference to the plot, kinda, the part about breasts I mean.) Sorry. I will stick with this tale to the very end. I like the story behind all the tit, too.

Man I hope you keep on going. This story has SO much potential. You could literally go anywhere in the realm of the supernatural. I already have so many ideas and it's not even my story lol. But damn that makes me excited for the future. Keep going man.

Grate character, nice to get back in the plot;)

Looking forward to your next posting... thanks again

Very interesting story and characters, especially the Begotten.

This whole story is so good.

Your mind must be a scary place...:)

My mind isn't a scary place!

I just, really like dark, macabre stuff. I'd make MLV darker, more horror-ish, if I thought I could get away with it. >.>

Jack is truly an idiot. Liked him to start but not so much any more.

I am highly amused by Jack's "If there's one way I'm going to get myself killed, it's this." because he always manages to not quite die.

So very good!