All Comments on 'My Little Ventrue Pt. 05 Ch. 15'

If you're trying to say you want more Antoinette sex scenes, I'm afraid you'll have to wait until after the conclusion of this bound to be violent excursion. :)

hay Anonymous Go now go quickly to the nearest mental hospital and have yourself put in a padded room and then have the key destroyed. As far as the story goes Jeremiah needs to be strapped upon a giant fire ant hill and dipped in honey. Or at a minimum Jack Damien and friends to the rescue.

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Here I was enjoying a wonderful story and it started to take off only to turn into a cliffhanger. I will lie here resentfully chewing my bone until this situation is rectified. Be aware, if this goes on too long I will start peeing on things!

Seriously though, good chapter. I was wondering when Jeremiah would turn up again and to turn up with a Beggoten minion... boy do I hate him, a whole bunch. We're talking traffic warden/tax inspector level. I wonder how our plucky, yet disfunctional, group of unheroes will get out of this sticky situation.

Awesome Adventure!

I’m surprised Jessy didn’t squee when she saw Eric as a sexy wolf. Definitely some fun times ahead— if he gets out alive, that is.

The man just wants to kill Azamel. So he's a little twisted, you have to be to hunt godly monsters. :)

NovusAnimus,

This may seem like a little bit of a drastic change to your story for a reader to request...

But will you kindly pledge to never include a sex scene with Antoinette in it again?

I don't know if the other Anonymous thinks he's a *hilarious* troll or if god was confused at birth over which head was supposed to be the brain, but it got old and boring after his third comment.

Just ignore the horny guy, I'm sure he's harmless. Jack/Antoinette pairing is what brought many of us here and I most def wanna see more of them. The other pairs are nice too.

I’m getting sick of this ineptitude. Eric is a cunt just a diseased fucked out loose used up cunt. The guy is supposedly ex MMA yet he is constantly paralysed by fear and then at best runs away but even then he fails and gets caught. Shit the guy was confronted by 4 thugs at his apartment, Eric had the advantage many many times over. The thugs are outside the door and the door is a choke point that can’t be avoided. So Eric just had to punch each one as hard as possible to disable them temporarily so when the next thug stood in the doorway alone then he could get hit, and so on. The guy did nothing except let himself be beaten to a pulp even when he was stabbed.

The dumb useless fuck keeps going on about this is my territory And defend defend defend yet he doesn’t. If Eric went guru wolf in the apartment then he would have had real stopping power along with his mma training and fight experience. Eric is meant to be the hero looking for glory type wolf. However he’s just a cunt and a pussy who lets his friend and another wolf take the fight to the enemy and loose. But it’s ok as Eric was busy stroking his pussy.

I have to say it but you’ve fucked up this character and the only way to fix it is to kill him and forget him. You billed this guy as a well known excellent MMA fighter with just a bad knee and anger issues. Yet every time he runs away and still get caught, just gives up and let’s useless thugs beat him up and stab him, let’s the girl he likes defend him while he just strokes his pussy. IT JUST DOESN’T MATCH. IYS LIKE HE IS SCHIZOPHRENIC.

Also why don’t the wolves go guru form? Massive juggernaut war machines, built to dish out damage to both natural and supernatural creatures whilst taking damage and repairing themselves on the fly…

So basically I’m skimming this entire story arc. Just reading the plot points and I’m skipping most af that stupid shit as well.

Also another story point that makes no sense is Fiona liking Damien. Think about it… bubbly young girl who leaves a dull Scottish city for the food and sexual lifestyle of Dumeraido. Why just why would she be interested in a dumb fuck betrayer who is boring repressed a loner insular asexual and oblivious to her EVEN WHEN HE’S JUST BEEN STRAIGHT UP TOLD ONLY 3 MINUTES BEFORE. Also Fiona knows that Damien is a God botherer so why would she expect any experimental sexy kinky fuckery from him? It’s just another tnis that makes no sense in this story and is so annoying and frustrating and POINTLESS to read. So I don’t, skim skim skim.

Skim over the bullshit story arc fuckups and their sex scenes and just read the vamp story plot and character development pieces.