by NovusAnimus
I thought about it and I think I approve the new set of titties despite not finding bugs and maggots attractive. Since Antoinette’s epic titties have been retired never to be played with again, which saddens me and my weeping willy below, the new pair of bouncy spidery ones better make appearances on each chapter from now on, or else I will be disappointed again and feel compelled to frown upon this watermelonless story.
I've been waiting for your submission... as always, you did not disappoint!!! Another great chapter!!! I have one request, please do not make Jack become a homicidal maniac. I am very happy that you are finally bringing Damien and Fiona/Vrall together. Speaking of couples, it would be great to see the sheriff and Jack's mom get together. Love is grand ;)
Finally caught up. Been reading this for two weeks now. What a great story. Well, jack and antoinette, not my cup of tea.But characters have good depth and plot is great. But I feel in early chapters, you hyped antoinette bit much. That is acceptable when we create characters that are smarter than us. Like in sherlock.
(I had many things to say while i m reading the story, but i forgot them all. So sad)
And I'm so glad that julies is(sorry *was) the white knight, not jack. I mean look at the three square meals, Boring and shallow as hell thanks to that. But i think jack is gotten slightly OP in last chapter, but again its kinda inevitable in these types of stories i guess. Sooner or later. But i trust you to walk on that path in the right pace. Again, thanks for the nice story. I read purely for the story and usually skip the erotica