by NovusAnimus
I am definitely hooked on this story! You are an amazing writer! I love that’s you have a nice mix of sensuality and excitement/ adventure! Well done! Thank you!!!!
This is one of my favorite stories. The only problem is that I binged read most of it now I’m waiting for each part that takes weeks at a time.
I don't normally like icky, gory, frightening stories, but I've made an exception for you, NovusAnimus, and one other author... because you are both that good, and your stories are so interesting and well written. Only problem I see, is that there's not enough pages for gluttonous fans like me ;D . Thanks again for sharing your stories with us, your fans.
Thanks for the love, readers.
@SweetOne66 Sorry, about the gore. There's a blood/flesh aesthetic I've been trying to hit, that's attached to both Elen, and the Circle of the Crone (which have a lot of overlap). I may be trying to paint the parallels between them a little thick XD
Finally cought up, and I wish I wasn't! I'll be waiting for the next part :)
Too much talking and inner monologue. This is supposed to be a fight. While it’s good for us to get some insight of what going on, it also slows down the thrill of the story. Adrenaline was up for the fight but it’s been nothing but thinking and now it’s just like fuck it. You do this a lot and I have skipped and skimmed a lot pages to get to actual stuff happening. Good story though