All Comments on 'My Little Ventrue Pt. 07 Ch. 19'

What? No cliffhanger? You're losing your touch. LOL

Good job on the angst of revenge; it's never as satisfying in actuality, as it is during contemplation.

Once you figure that out, and learn to let things go, you discover the anticipation of if, or when, you might strike back is much more devastating, and never ends.

Kinda like how Annie has had Jack worried about her friend for so damn long. Poor bastard, she plays him like a fucking violin.

GeoD

Still think it would be a good political move for the Prince to bring Clara in to her and Jack's bed. Having a werewolf as a lover makes them a better ally.

Well that should be enough sex to fulfill everyone for awhile. 5 stars and fav story as usual.

Where oh where have you gone? I check daily, but no up date. I am having withdrawal pains...

@sweetone66 ?? Chapter 7.22 was uploaded today.

Jen needs to go, soon. Forced her way into Triss and Julias’s relationship and just moves after next conquest without a thought. She could be the worst character you have here. Don’t care you trying to set up more of your over the top sex. She has no heart and her whorishness it takes away from the scenes. Wish you wouldn’t put her with Triss in the beginning. I don’t care she will try to use this to help Triss. Don’t like it. It doesn’t feel right. Not knocking the story it’s good, just don’t like Jen. I’m sure most do like her wanting to fuck everyone that moves but some of us like a little connection and no way I will believe this girl will have that even if you write it that way

Just because of Jen I think I will complete skip any Triss POV. It don’t come off as trying to help Triss get over Julias. You can write that’s what it is all day but it doesn’t feel that way at all. Everyone will be happy to have new stuff to jerk to but I rather have a good story.