All Comments on 'My Little Ventrue Pt. 08 Ch. 01'

I feel like a small child at the dessert bar…”More, please?” I love that you’ve crafted the story so that even with a major plot event resolved, we are ready to begin the climb again with no real need for an extensive period of rebuilding. Many publishing authors only tease the next book in the last chapter after resolution, but you’ve been building a foundation for practically half way through part 5. Thank you for sharing this with us.

This was better, less Elaine and Jack is showing awareness to stay weary of her intentions. You hinted at Clara, now it is time to bring her more into the story line.

Excellent! I enjoyed this chapter very much and am looking forward to many more!

Links to the othe pt.8 stories aren’t working please look into that