All Comments on 'My Little Ventrue Pt. 09 Ch. 18'

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SensualSigmaSensualSigmaover 1 year ago

Oh I worry about Michael and Garry living after this and knowing about Viktor, Tony and Lucas. Gonna take more than Princely mega-knockers to sort all this out.

KyrissanKyrissanover 1 year ago

Holy fucking shit! This fight is absolutely mindblowing


I‘m out of words and ideas to describe the impact this chapter had on me!

TwinSoulFlamesTwinSoulFlamesover 1 year ago

My goodness! Keep them coming! I know you said we were starting to wind down this story, and I understand. I do. But I'll tell you that of all the stories I've read on this site, this is one of the very best. Your plot building is fantastic. I give a crap about your characters. And I can't wait to see what happens next. Pair that to the fact that it's in a setting that I personally find fascinating (V:tR, W:tF, etc...)? A true masterpiece.

nthusiasticnthusiasticover 1 year ago

Azamel is awesome! Good for her. Maybe she can spank some sense into the naughty little boys. She should put them in time out until they learn to play together nicely.

Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Now that was a monster mash.

5*

sempergumby1963sempergumby1963over 1 year ago

I didn't see that one coming! I was anticipating the sheriff intervening, but this works better. Absolutely this series is in the top 3 stories in the entire site. Thank you for your work.

link_8link_8over 1 year ago

Literally on the edge of my seat. I'm not even sure how Azamel got pulled into this but I am so hyped for the next chapter. I agree that it feels like she's about to spank some sense into naughty boys. lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Boo!

I wanted the Sheriff to pop up and stake the three of em, mid-fight.

"You will respect my authoritah." (Daniel style)

:D

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

More More More please... cliff hanger stopping point..... although I would have liked seeing both Michael and Garry dead

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Damn,it's infuriating to wait when it just getting interesting

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Been reading this series since the beginning, and just want to say I really enjoy the way you’ve been dealing with the curse. It’s a tool, a risk, an actual thinking entity, and while it’s got enough charm to be a fun read, in all the back and forth it keeps proving itself to be something Jack just can’t quite live with. That’s a hard balance to get right!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

One roller-coaster ride after another with just enough time to catch one's breath and that over such a long time, BRAVO Sir, BRAVO

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Gosh I really hope the Reaper would just coexist with jack somehow😟,

Though it hurt me to say this but it's seems like jack will definitely get ride of the curse... and that's one if my worries đŸ˜©

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