All Comments on 'My Little Ventrue Pt. 09 Ch. 21'

OMG sex scenes!? I forgot this was an erotic story for a bit, there.

LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!

Best story on this website. Loved this chapter. You went back to the roots with sex between Jack and Antoinette being a major part of the story. Really great chapter.

Contrary to other opinions, I was happy for this story to roll on with the recent frequency and duration of sex scenes. Sexy stories are better than sex stories. Anyway, I'll skim through a ridiculously extended tit fuck or ten to keep going with this story.

Honestly with all the exciting event's, I too forgot this was an erotic story😌...

But I'm starting to think if Jack isn't from a Royal blood line... cause He definitely fit in as a King 🤔

Is it just me or is the events unfolding in Dolareido, is in some way interlinked with Elaine's presence there ....I have a feeling that Elaine would betray Antoinette to Black Blood. And Black Blood would in turn betray Jacob; probably by harming Jack's Mom & make it seem as though it was Jacob's doing to pit Jack against him.

All in all, Jack's Sire does come back but dies again to save Jack or some other chivalrous stuff.

Anyways, loving the story progression.... waiting for more!!!

very disappointed that jack was not the first to drink from clara. It was overall a decent chapter.

Clara and Jack just need to seperate themselves from each other. The Urethra meetings are with the boss, Avery, not the 2IC Clara. So Clara should piss off from those for a start. Clara wants Jack and always will, so hanging out is a no no as it will destroy their lives always being uncomfortable and forlorn about what it would be like but knowing it would be short term.

It’s just a grating aggravation they both don’t need.