All Comments on 'My Little Ventrue Pt. 10 Ch. 11'

Really enjoyed this chapter, so much action! I think you're such talented writer. I've totally bought into the characters. Still not sure I can forgive over you Julian such was the attachment, However my attachment to others increase all the time. The image of Scully guarding Jen turns me mushy and Mary seeing the new positives in her situation made me smile. I support you on Patreon because I'm able to and I want to support your talent. There was a long time when I couldn't even support myself and free sites like this can be godsend, stories that fire up the imagination can somehow sooth a bleak existence. So thank you for publishing here,

@notusuallyshy Thanks for the love and support! I do try and make my stories more character focused than most, for better or worse.

Now THIS is a World of Darkness!

5*

OMG! I've never needed the next chapter of this story as I need this one now!!!!

Gory, but great! You do have a way with words N.A.-- really can't wait for the next chapter!!

This Write up is just insane!!! Dude it's MIND BLOWING!!🤯

I’m so glad I remembered to catch up with this story first from my favourites I’ve had to leave aside for a bit. Really, your writing is gorgeous and has consistently managed to both genuinely excite me and managed to be truly compelling character work

Thanks for sharing...

Definitely one of the best reads on the site.. My hat is off to you kind Sir! Bravo!

It makes me ponder upon who your going to hatchet in the next posting?

Thanks again for sharing your world with us.

Ripper has finally found the balance to merging with practical logic, after such a long time of unsuccessful takeover attempts ( or has he? ) no doubt he's gotten smarter, nonetheless....

Will Mary ride to the rescue, Eomer style or would she join her corrupted brother in sin???

Did Jacob plan for the ripper to kill the werewolves?

We shall see, in next instalment. Hopefully soon.

FIVE STARS

BAAH Hunbug !