All Comments on 'My Living Doll'

Absolutely loved the ending.

I Think a follow-up with Him doing his Brothers wife in front of Him would be Appropriate. Loved the Ending.

Stupid fucking cheating whore slut wife.

In chapter 2 I hope she dies.

Fuck everybody who thinks she should live.

This a story about a man who is only in love with himself and the power he's able to wield. There is certainly no sign of the extraordinary intelligence he's supposed to have. He has a trophy wife who is little more than a possession that he uses as an outlet for his sexual desires. He has, in fact, a very sad life.

His wife's character is drawn as if she's straight out of a pornographic cartoon and the violence is a complete turn off for me.

I don't like being so negative, but I couldn't find anything in either the story or the characters that appealed to me.

Worst story I think I have ever read on Literotica .... a true stinker

aren't Corvettes mostly fiberglass and plastic, much like this story?

Nice gallows humour story. Thanks for poking fun at this category and its stories.

Just awful. Was it supposed to be amusing?

Nice set-up. Did not see that one-liner coming and it did make me smile. Good job.

'nuff said

Too bad there are so many readers who cannot see satire and who should just enjoy the ride. Your tale was clever and humorous from the beginning, e.g., Barbie and Ken (of all names). But the last line was the best. Thanks.

The punchline was ok, but the set-up was too long.

what a piece of shit

way to go! I enjoyed it

loving wives not a chance in hell. a guy rather kill many guys rather than get a divorce when he has a prenup? bullshit no pussy is worth death sentence

Very well done.

think about all the medical costs curing all the diseases she gets

I wonder how a Corvette would be a pile of scrap metal as the body is all fiberglass ?

The fat kid who gets picked on in gym class wrote this. This had all the trappings of a pathetic loser saying I get beat down and never have been laid so ill write how powerful and smart I am. Lame but ni willing cuck caught you 2 strz.

Sure it was nasty. It's a gangster story, like The Godfather. He is a vicious guy. He told us at the beginning that he was and he was correct. He also described his wife as beautiful but vacuous. She also stayed true to her character right up to the humorous ending. She also proved that brainless can also be vicious, although unintentionally. Robert is about to get killed and Barbie nicely volunteers Janice to be hurt instead. Janice has done nothing to deserve any pain but Barbie happily serves her up. He is amoral through his intelligence. She is amoral through her lack of intelligence.

Sadly, I expect Barbie will meet her demise someday soon because she won't be able to keep her legs together. Perhaps a nice gold statue of her in her bikini?

... in India.

I think this should have been in humor and satire too many took it seriously when it was obviously tongue in cheek.....I think the author originally meant for the car to be a mustang GT but realized that would insult SS so he changed it to a vette but forgot to change the remains to plastic.

That's what we called these way back in Lit II. You have a thought, you just go ahead and write it, then you throw it away. You have some promise in writing humor. The Barbie comparisons flew once or twice, then not so much. The final line was....eh. Keep trying.

Just plain ole stupid.

you wrote this? and why? never mind.

Plius a slight satarical bent, tossing pineapple grenades at revenge stories on this site for cheating wives. The Barbie and Ken cheating couple was cute and it helped to lighten the dark theme of killing his wife's fuck toys. I would like to have known what he was going to do with his loving brother. Last line of the story was quite good.

Why was this story written? It was stupid!

Gezzzz

she was a blond right? well that says it all.

...no comment.

5 Only for the punchline...... good one.

Finally! A story that focuses on killing the assholes that show no respect for someone else's marriage. Just because she is attractive, willing, naïve, feeling old, neglected, not sexually satisfied with her husband, whatever...it does not make it alright to screw someone else's wife. Every male cheater should either die or lose his dick. There would not be any cheating wives for you guys to hate and despise without assholes seducing them, or just going along with the cheating for pussy.

That most of you trolls are haters of cheating women...that fact reinforces the belief that you yourself failed to treat a woman correctly in some way or another at one time. A woman that loves you completely and respects you will not cheat on you unless she is forced to in some other way. It is easy to hate the ex-wife when she betrays you...or even when she has had enough of your particular bullshit and just left you for another! But contrary to these stories that paint the husband as something special...we really know better don't we?

This was in fact a great story...I think! Shouldn't we get rid of the assholes that chase our women and seduce them? Aren't we all prey for either men or women who can talk a great game with apparent sincerity? Why should men be allowed to get away with destroying one's marriage? Why should the wife always be hated for falling prey to these predators? Aw...why do I waste my time? To avoid death threats I will remain an anon!

A bit extreme, but a man has to do what a man has to do.

He should just chain her in the basement.

HA HA

What a great way to end a story!

That is some dumb cunt

Should have been posted in humor. Or whatever noun goes with sardonic.

A fun read. Five stars.

Too bad really since she does not have a clue what she is doing that so wrong - she knew it was not right but just not how wrong -

Like him she has no moral compass to help with decisions -

Good pair -

This is totally wrong for the Loving Wives, LOL. Although there's a cheating wife, the tale would fit so much better in the Humor category.

he should have followed the advice of some of his friends and disposed of her in some manor. Perhaps selling her to a brothel in a foreign country.

Nothing more to say.

He needs to be 'taken care of' the same way the others were. If not, he'll be back.

one way or the other

Written around a joke. Reminds me of the 'shaggy dog' stories from when I was a kid.

This sounds like someone trying to protect a pet dog with rabies. She should pour some hot grease in his ear while he is sleeping. If she told the authorities how many men her killer husband had gotten rid of, she probably would not do any time.

Not for the story - but for all of the comments from idiots that took it seriously.

Hats off to the hero of this story!

Killing off interlopers and home wreckers who seduce away your nearest and dearest is not a method I would recommend dealing with infidelity all the time, but I understand what could drive him to such extraordinary measures. Which man hasn't endured the humiliation and misfortune of having his marriage or deep relationship with his favorite lady busted up, and had to swallow his pride?

Give interlopers what they have coming to 'em. That's how I feel!

Not likely to happen in real life...I can dream, can't I?

GREAT LITTLE TONGUE IN CHEEK DITTY,5⭐️

What a great little story. An absolute classic.

...but I'm not sure who. She seems dumb as a stump, but he is the one who keeps her. Dumb just isn't sexy.

There is an idiot in this story, and I'm afraid it's me for reading it and losing time and brain cells I really need to keep me being at idiot level for reading this type of .....!

"innocent woman-child" who just can't stop cheating on her husband

Great story. It truly deserves 1 star.

You thought of the punchline first. Tell me I'm wrong. Lol!

Chastity belt / piercings, shock / GPS collar, brain implant. This s bitch if kept needs to be put on an extremely short leash.

Positive/ Negative reprogramming (pain/pleasure) cheat you get pain, stay faithful you get pleasure. This bitch doesn't seem like she'll learn unless it's really personal as in inflicted upon her own person.

Reading this train wreck is painful. I couldn’t make it to the end, just got about halfway through. Gave it up for being hopelessly stupid.

that humor tag saved ya lol it wasnt funny to me though. i mean is there any men left after he kills them all. maybe she starts doing women and he kills all of them too. thats not even "an eye for an eye" and do u know who jabba the hut is? so this guy was fat and sloppy. he marries barbie knowing she just in it for the money thinking she isnt going to cheat? and when she does he kills not sure this guy is all the smart.

thats the problem most ppl have when writing characters smarter than they are lol comes out too unbelievable

[20.05.23]

Ba-Dum-Da!

11/10!!!!!

Not clever. Not funny. Just really really dumb. And I like most of your LW stories. Not this one.

What kind of nonsense are you writing?Keep to well thought out story lines and realism.. this is bad..I have gotten accustomed to your good tales with the occasional misfire,but this???? ..1 star..JZK