All Comments on 'My Love Affair with My Son Pt. 03'

by westjayne495

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 2 years ago
Connotations of Cognitive Dissonance

Amazing words that capture the thoughts of a woman who desperately wants to cross the parapet of societal mores.

Touching is the Bulwark of taboo. Redolent beauty of when my mother and I crossed from teasing to our first touching.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 2 years ago

Love reading this. More please.

cageysea9725cageysea9725about 2 years ago

One would think that with 63 submissions on this site, someone along the way would have told you to look up how to write dialogue.

Maybe they did, and you just can't understand it. I can see that. You don't exhibit much that would indicate you could understand something like that.

This is bad.

Heybuddy65Heybuddy65about 2 years ago

Very well written. So erotic. I hope there is more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very hot!

KlitomaticKlitomaticabout 2 years ago

So much more to tell, I can't wait.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

wow fantastic

stockingnutstockingnut3 months ago

So hot! You had had me at stockings!

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Thoroughly enjoying my return to Lit, both writing stories and chatting. Love to hear from anyone who reads my stories and has any comments to make both positive and negative but please not anonymously! I am getting used to being separated and despite the lockdowns enjoying m...