All Comments on 'My Love Affair with My Son Pt. 04'

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emz77remz77rabout 2 years ago

Loving this, great interaction

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 2 years ago
Can they overcome this abeyance

Some interruptions can never be overcome. Will Richard be appalled or turned on? Was there really a trip or just a ploy to catch them?

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 2 years ago

So close. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is getting really good.

NesticNesticabout 2 years ago

Great story… luscious buildup … Oh my gosh … almost there … please don’t let us wait for to long.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please, oh please, we want more! Well written and the slow build up is wonderful!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I don't think you really know what the word spasmodic means, or how to use it in a sentence.

Wiz1002Wiz1002about 2 years ago

Oh dear, this is very embarrassing!! What will Richard say and do?

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Thoroughly enjoying my return to Lit, both writing stories and chatting. Love to hear from anyone who reads my stories and has any comments to make both positive and negative but please not anonymously! I am getting used to being separated and despite the lockdowns enjoying m...

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