All Comments on 'My Maddie'

this was amazing <3

She is well on the way to becoming a good little slut for Daddy!

Her daddy should knock her up.

I'm sorry, but in within a few days I frequently feel distracted when reading 'site' where it's 'sight", 'you're' where it should be 'your' and so on. Again in this story. Please, have someone who knows about spelling read your text before publishing it. It could increase the joy of reading the story ;-) BTW, I look forward to the next part.

"To Be Continued..."

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I hate, hate, hate, hate, HATE getting to the end of a story that doesn't have a chapter number and reading shit like that. If you cared at all about your own story you would have used a chapter number in the title.

Awesome story. Would be even more awesome to write a sequel where the mom, Anne, discovers them having sex and joins in and is ok with dad and Maddie fucking. Then dad impregnates them both with babies and they raise one big polyamourous family where mom and daughter enjoy dad's big cock all day and all night every day.

Really enjoyed this story, had a nice build-up and a satisfying conclusion. Looking forward to the next instalment!