All Comments on 'My Maid Loses Her Virginity'

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Jonny_BluelineJonny_Bluelineover 8 years ago
A Masterful Piece Of Erotica!

This is a very well written short story. I hope you continue additional chapters.

AlinaJ19AlinaJ19about 8 years ago
An amazing read

The setting, the details, the atmosphere.... It's like I was there.. Looking forward to read more from you

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
So nice...

So nice that I didn't realize I was touching myself until I came to the part where you buried your face in Sunita's bushy armpit. I lost it, almost doubling over as I made a mess of my pajamas, cumming with an intensity I rarely do these days.

Bravo!

ReefBeachReefBeachover 5 years ago
great writing

Very sensual & erotic, with beautiful details of the lady. I especially liked the hints of a deeper story: "again it is happening", the dream, etc.

I'd prefer to see it in The First Time section, since that's the high point of the story really.

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French expatriate working in Asia, primarily India and Vietnam, with an ache for sexual adventure and in constant search of love.