- NonHuman
- My Mate Pt. 01
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My wolf is the one in charge in this moment. He has rejected Cami, he wants someone else. When I realize where I am going, it is the stables. Who is in this place right now? When I open the door, a set of dreamy green eyes lock with mine. It is Jenna, my mate. Guess I was wrong.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 4 years agoI am an American who knows some Spanish and as I translated your story into Spanish in my head as I read it it flowed a lot better. I don't know if you have any native english speaking friends locally, if not, you could also ask thru Literotica for a volunteer editor.
FISHINGDUDEabout 5 years agoGood Story! Keep Writing! Do you follow Jaz Cullens work at all?
cantfightfatealmost 6 years agoSome editing to help with the language would be beneficial.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoKeep going this was a wonderful start to a potentially great story.
