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by RossBarnes

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amsterdamamsterdamabout 7 years ago
Promising but no pay-off

Although I enjoyed the story, the most interesting part would have been to know how the relationship between Mr W & Lynsey developed and ultimately whether it changed, e.g. with her teasing him mercilessly or taking advantage of her newly acquired knowledge. This wasn't the case, and with no sequel, I feel that the story lacked a conclusion and gave me more questions than answers. Shame, as the story has great potential. You would also benefit from an editor to iron out your spelling mistakes and grammar issues. Let me know if you ever pen the sequel...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved it. Hope to find my own Dr. Domia and nurse Lynsey.

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I am a successful businessman. I have lived in both Europe and four states in the U.S. Currently I am in Southern California. Any story I post will be based on actual events. In fact, I change the names and some of the details, but they are generally true. I hope you enjo...