by renee77
but that's all. Not that I'm against hot. But read Sir_Nathan's story Culture_Shock, and you'll see how you could make this story hotter by a quantum leap. Make us see the characters, tell us how they met, how the relationship grew, what their lives are like aside from sex. Let us look at these people as people, not cardboard cliches.
i guess you got a lot readers very, very hot and curious now...wanting to know what "everything" is...so we are waiting for more (mistress cornelia)
The excitement of this eroticism is unyielding. Very arousing as all of your stories have been. Thanks for the entertainment!