All Comments on 'My Michelle'

by Azrael556

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wow

I don't ususally go for BDSM on this board but this one was hot, hot. Write more please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very nice

I am not a big fan of the hard core BDSM but tales like yours

are hot. You have a talent. Hopefully this is only the first

chapter?

mjl2010mjl2010over 16 years ago
This was a good start.

Now sit your butt down and write say, nine or ten more chapters of this. LOL I thought it was great. Well done. Maybe shorten some of those paragraphs though. Split them up. They're hard to read on the monitor. - MJL

atom117atom117over 16 years ago
More Please

One story per day = 365 excellent episodes hopefully 8¬))

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
NICE!!

Very, very nice!!!! I can't wait for more, please!

Andromeda7Andromeda7over 12 years ago

Very nice start , to what looks like an interesting story.

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