by apple231601
I didn't read your story, sorry. I just stopped by to let you know that your subtitle should read "Lady Ailira et al" rather than "et all." The difference is that "et al" is short for "et aliis," which is "and others" in Latin, while "et all" just mixes up two languages.
You're absolutely right, and I'm sorry neither I, nor the Lit editor's caught the mistake!
Don't feel like you have to post anonymously though, your correction is fair and right and I won't bite your head off for it.
My apologies if it ruined anyone's enjoyment of the story.