by rubysen
Good story. would have been better w more detailed description of fucking (choda-chudi)with dad (ba-ba)alonwg w maoning with native language(bangala shanglap). Same is true for describing mother's fucking with uncle --, description of mama's pussy (shaowa/gud) and uncle's cock (bura) -.
Want more --
the effect of the father's death on both is brought out so well.
What does "pined" mean to you? I sort of understand what you're trying to say simply because of the context but I don't know that word.
It's a good story though.